Saturday, October 30, 2010

Week Eight ( Final week before Midterm Grades entered) 100 EC Points if you print out syllabus by Tuesday Beginning of Class)

Day
Class Work
Homework
Monday
Place post-its on drafts with 3 things you want teacher to focus on for feedback.

Discuss “Community Service and You”
By T.J. Saftner
1.     Read for the Gist
2.     In your Reader’s/Writer’s Notebook answer:
What is the text about?
What is the Issue?
Who is the writer?
What do we know about him?
How do we know?

Reread to identify the author’s argument:
What is the author’s argument?
How do you know?

In your Reader’s Writer’s Notebook
Answer the question:
How can community service be advocacy?

Refer to the Advocacy Table in
Your Reader’s Writer’s Notebook

Activity
Actions





To help you answer.

Compare and Contrast how advocacy appeared in Chiadis, Martin Luther King Essay and Saftner.
Draw an Activity/Action Table to help you answer.

Tuesday
Shortened Day
Read Again Differently:
What makes the text Persuasive?

-Is this text persuasive?
Complete your quick Write on:

Explain why with reference to the texts, other texts, and your own experiences.


What are the characteristics that make this text persuasive?
Complete Graphic Organizer with elbow partner:

Persuasive
Yes/No
Argument:




Significant Sentence
Why/How Persuasive
Method




Add to chart: What Makes a Persuasive Essay?

Analysis of Texts: Methods to Persuade
How does Safter build the argument? What evidence does the author use to support the argument? Is the evidence accurate, adequate, and appropriate? How does each method work to persuade the audience?

Analysis of Text Structure:

In your Reader’s Writer’s Notebook Answer:

How does Saftner structure his argument?
How is this structure appropriate to the audience and argument?

To answer this question think about:

What topics does the author cover? In what order does the information appear? How is the text organized?

Remember to cite the specific place in the text.

Revise your rough drafts!

DUE IN CLASS WEDNESDAY

(TWO Zero’s if you do not come to class with your completed letter).

Wednesday
Complete Quick Write on:
How does each of the three authors we read in the last few weeks (KING, CHIADIS, SAFTNER) begin the text to engage the reader?
Chart Out

Peer Review of Student’s Advocacy Letter
Revise your draft
Focusing on rewriting your introduction:
Bring rough Draft to class
DUE IN CLASS Thursday
(TWO Zero’s if you do not come to class with your completed letter).



Thursday

Ending with A Punch
What does each author do to end his/her persuasive text?
Which ending do you consider most effective? Why?

How do the endings these author’s choose to write match their argument and audience? Explain with specific reference to the texts, the authors’ audiences and the texts they used.

Staple class and teacher created rubric to your draft and assess your work.

LAST CHANCE TO TURN IN ANY MISSING WORK BEFORE MID_TERM GRADES IS TOMORROW!





Revise persuasive Letter and Complete Final draft:

Due Monday

NO LATE WORK AS GRADE WINDOW OPENS.
Friday

MR. Genut
Students read through Drafts either with elbow partner/peer and find a paragraph that needs to be more persuasive. Revise paragraph-getting help from partner or teacher as needed.
Revise persuasive Letter and Complete Final draft:

Due Monday

NO LATE WORK AS GRADE WINDOW OPENS.


Wednesday, October 27, 2010

USC at Library during Lunch on the 28th

Go for 100 Extra Credit Points...

Get rep to sign  for credit!

Introduce yourselves NOW!!!!

Sunday, October 24, 2010

Say Mean Matter


SAY-MEAN-MATTER

Say-Mean-Matter is the name for a strategy that helps students question the text, search for deeper meanings, and make connections between text and their lives. It’s effective for all student levels from language learners to honors and AP students. It can be used with academic texts, with fiction, and with non-verbal material as well.

The strategy uses a three-column chart. This can be on an overhead, chart paper, chalkboard or whatever is handy. Once students have learned the method, they can quickly draw the graphic organizer and use it to find meaning and significance. SAY, MEAN, and MATTER are the 3 column titles on the chart.  When initially teaching the strategy, explain what each means using age-appropriate directions and suggestions.

SAY

MEAN
MATTER
What does the text say?
What happened?
Cite text (quotation) or paraphrase.
What does the author mean?
How do I interpret this?
Read “between the lines.”
Why does it matter to me or others?
Why is this important?
What is the significance?
What are the implications?



  1.       For each item on the SAY list,  students write what they believe the statement means.   Ask questions, such as, “What makes you think that?” “How do you know that?”

  3.  The third column is the most abstract and may prove to be difficult at first.  . Ask yourself : “So what?” “What is the theme of the piece?” “How does this piece connect to your own life?” “What does it matter to you?”  Or, “What questions does this piece raise?”  “What implications does it hold for a given group of people, or for people in general?” In this column you find the meaning and depth of the piece.

  4.  Use the ideas recorded on the chart to create your thesis and body paragraphs. One way to do this is to start with a statement from the “MATTER” column as a topic or thesis statement, and then draw on the “SAY” and “MEAN” columns for supporting details. The first column provides “text proof,” (what the text says), while the second column provides student interpretation.

Syllabus Week Seven ( Print by Tuesday Classtime for 100 extra Credit points)


Day
Class Work
Homework
Monday
Reread “Board of Education”
Identify Structures

Is the
Board of Education Letter Persuasive?”

Do you think it would be persuasive to the Board of Education? Why?

Methods to Persuade

What is Chiadis doing with this phrase?

What method is she using to persuade the reader?
What is the impact on you as a reader?
How are the methods appropriate to her audience, argument and purpose?
Add to characteristics of a persuasive text chart posted on wall.


1. Reread Chiadis
Evaluate Reasons and evidence

2. Answer the following questions in your Reader’s/Writer’s Notebooks:

A.     Where could Chiadis have used better/more reasons and evidence to strengthen the argument?
B.     What other counterarguments should she have addressed? How might she have rebutted them?
3. Bring in local newspaper articles that have stories or articles that cover subjects/topics that you might be interested in advocating for. (Culminating project research).


4. Wear a College T-shirt, sweatshirt, Pin, make a bookmark for the college of your choice for 100 points extra credit.
Tuesday
Shortened Day
College Prep Day with Ms. Sousani, the College Counselor
Review of the A-G requirements to get into a 4-year University or College.

Share Homework  (10 minutes)
A.     Where could Chiadis have used better/more reasons and evidence to strengthen the argument?
B.     What other counterarguments should she have addressed? How might she have rebutted them?


Reread MLK Essay

Complete the following Table:

What it means to be an advocate
How they make us care
King


Chiadis




Wednesday
Read Aloud Culminating Assignment

Develop Issues for Advocacy Chart
Issue
Audience









Planning your advocacy Letter:
What do you want to persuade your audience to do?
What argument will you make to persuade your audience?
What methods will you use to build and support your argument?
What reasons will you give?
What evidence will you use? Where can you search to find the evidence?
What will my audience’s counterarguments be? How can I rebut their counterarguments?


Planning your advocacy Letter:
What do you want to persuade your audience to do?
What argument will you make to persuade your audience?
What methods will you use to build and support your argument?
What reasons will you give?
What evidence will you use? Where can you search to find the evidence?
What will my audience’s counterarguments be? How can I rebut their counterarguments?




1. Make a list of what evidence you need to gather and support your argument.  Make at least 5 index cards with questions you need to answer!

Thursday

Library Day

Research your advocacy letter
Write Rough Draft of Advocacy Letter
Friday
Library Day

Google Docs

Submit rough draft of your Advocacy Letter through Google Docs
Read “Community Service and You”
By T.J. Saftner
1.     Read for the Gist
2.     In your Reader’s/Writer’s Notebook answer:
What is the text about?
What is the Issue?
Who is the writer?
What do we know about him?
How do we know?




Saturday, October 16, 2010

Culminating Project: Advocacy Letter


Begin Research on an Issue or Topic

Identify an issue that you are interested in learning more about as a possible topic for an advocacy letter. Begin to do research on who you might send your letter to / Also talk with others about where you might find information about your issue. Then write your topic and possible audience on an index card for Monday, October 25th class. 

Week Six ( Print out by Tuesday Class for 100 points Extra Credit)


Day
Class Work
Homework
Monday
Reread for Significance “Board of Education Letter”

Pair share significant sentences and phrases
(Handout and Rubric)

Answer the following questions: What is the letter about?
What is the issue? Who is the Writer?
What do we know about her?
How do we know?

Complete Table (Chart in class)
Occupation
Action









What is an Advocate
What does an advocate do?
Reread again
“Board of Education Letter”

What does it mean to persuade people through writing?

Write 2 paragraphs in your reader’s writer’s notebook and bring to class.

Remember to write legibly and
Enter into Table of Contents.







Tuesday

Review Advocacy and Persuasion Unit Sorting and Comprehension Questions.

Characteristics of Effective Explanations Sentences.

Write introductory paragraph on Gary Soto Essay using multi-colored pens, skip lines of Gary Soto Essay. Prompt is on pp.52 Remember to introduce and explain your quotations.

Soto used the avocado tree as a symbol to _____________,
______________, and __________________. ( Thesis Template).

Write Body Paragraphs and Conclusion for
Constructed Response Essay Page 52.
First Draft is
Due Friday.
Do with your colored pens and skip lines.

Use your outline/graphic organizer.
Wednesday
Is the
Board of Education Letter Persuasive?”

Do you think it would be persuasive to the Board of Education? Why?

Reflection on Discussion

Analysis of text: Methods to Persuade:



Write Body Paragraphs and Conclusion for
Constructed Response Essay Page 52.

Thursday
Mr. Genut is the guest Teacher today
Finish and correct
Sentence Fragments and Run-on Sentence correction exercises

Write Body Paragraphs and Conclusion for
Constructed Response Essay Page 52.

Friday
Reread “Board of Education”
Identify Structures

Introduce Culminating Project-
Read Aloud

Chart Criteria for a Good Topic
Begin Research on an Issue or Topic
Identify an issue that you are interested in learning more about as a possible topic for an advocacy letter. Begin to do research on who you might send your letter to / Also talk with others about where you might find information about your issue. Then write your topic and possible audience on an index card for Monday’s class.


Sunday, October 10, 2010

Five Paragraph Essay Checklist and Grading Rubric for Essay on The Grandfather by Gary Soto


ACTION
Check off
Student uses correct paragraph form

Student has all major parts of essay including introduction with a thesis, body paragraphs with evidence/support, counterargument, rebuttal and conclusion and call to action.
Student defends positions with facts, concrete data, expert opinion, eyewitness information, and quotations.

Evidence from the text is introduced (The author writes… notes, expresses, states….)

Evidence from the text is explained (This shows, proves, illustrates, demonstrates…)

Student does not have sentence fragments or run on sentences

Student uses commas appropriately

Student’s syntax does not cause confusion

Student’s essay is free from contractions

Student does not use first or second person in essay

Student uses subject-verb agreement and pronoun-antecedent agreement correctly

Student correctly identifies rhetorical devices (appeal to logic through reasoning, appeal to emotion or ethical belief, relate a personal anecdote, case study, or analogy).

Student correctly identifies types of argument contained within the text (causality, analogy, authority, emotion, and logic)

Student correctly indentifies author’s intent

Student correctly identifies the author’s tone

Student makes clear connections between the author’s theme/message/assertion and the structure of the text.

Student writes neatly/legibly